Mob Mentality Pilot Screenplay

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02/22/2010 23:20
America/Los Angeles
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A man bleeding and exhausted, carrying a powerful secret frantically searches for help, which comes from an unsuspecting stranger...

               INT. STAIRWAY - DAY

A young man, SHANE, stumbles up a staircase with a clenched
fist. It's clear he's been on the go for awhile.

At the top of the landing, he opens his hand and looks down
at a bunch of keys attached to a small USB drive. He thrusts
them into his pocket and cautiously opens a door. Sweat beads
form on his forehead.

He enters a hallway, exhausted and struggling to keep from
vomiting.

APARTMENT/LOFT HALLWAY - DAY

Shane runs down a long hallway lined with numbered doors.
He's out of breath as he stops in front of door. His jaw
drops open, he flexes it strangely, it's apparent he's not
completely together.

He closes his eyes, reopens them, and almost loses his
balance.

SHANE
Oh, fuck.

He touches a small wound on his forearm, frantically looks
around and then pounds on a door.

SHANE (CONT'D)
Hey! Hello?

No answer. Panting, he frantically looks down both
directions to the hallway to see if anyone looking. Or
following. He puts his hand on the door knob and...

CLICK

It's locked.

ANGRY TENANT DUDE (O.S)
(loud and threatening)
Hey, fuckhead!

Shane stumbles backwards away from the door, surprised and
thrown off balance.
He runs, stumbling further down the hall, throwing a glance
over his shoulder at Angry Tenant Dude's door.

SHANE
Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit….

He rounds a corner into another hallway, turns to another
door and knocks.

Shane looks down at fisted hand, still holding the USB key.
He knocks on the door one more time.

SHANE (CONT'D)
Hey! Hello...is anyone there?
Please?

A beat.

SHANE (CONT'D)
(To himself)
Please be a nice old lady.
(near plead ing; mumbling)
Come on, grandma, open up. Come
on, come on, come on...

Then the door opens and a WOMAN answers the door, wielding a
glass of champagne. This is VICTORIA (late 30s-early 40s).
She throws Shane a wide smile and laughs, a little tipsy.

VICTORIA
(as a form of greeting)
Brandon!

SHANE
Uh, hi...

VICTORIA
Heyyyy!

SHANE
I... Ahh...

VICTORIA
Oh, you're a little early, but it's
all right. Come on in.

SHANE
(confused)
Huh? Yeah. Okay.

Victoria ushers him in and Victoria points him toward the
sofa to sit.

VICTORIA
I still need a few more minutes,
but I get ready pretty quickly.
I'm not one those girls who takes
forty million hours to arrange one
stupid hair.

SHANE
(dazed)
Okay.

ANOTHER ANGLE - OFFICE AREA

ANGLE ON VICTORIA'S LAPTOP

Shane leans forward with interest, looking at it. He shuts
his eyes hard, and then opens them, trying to focus.

VICTORIA
So do you want a drink? I have
white wine or red.

ANGLE ON LAPTOP

so agonizingly close. Three steps away. Shane is
practically salivating, and his hand touches the pocket that
shields the USB key.

SHANE
Huh? Uh...

Victoria doesn't wait for an answer and pours two glasses -
one red wine and one white, comes out and hands him both
glasses. She smiles

VICTORIA
Or, we can have a wine-tasting.
But try the white first. It's a
palate thing.

Shane accepts both glasses. Victoria takes a seat beside him,
blocking his view of her laptop. He sits upright. Silence.
She laughs nervously.

VICTORIA (CONT'D)
Blind dates are kind of nerve
wracking, aren't they?
(beat)
You know, you don't look much like
your picture.

Shane looks at her, which she takes as an affront.

VICTORIA (CONT'D)
Oh, it's not a bad thing. It's
just that your picture, um, didn't
do you justice. That's not coming
out right.
(changes topic)
What do you think of the white?

She grimaces. This is awkward. She takes a large sip from
her own glass. Shane, in response, begins sipping from one
of his glasses. He's completely out of it.

SHANE
It's good.

As he sips the other glass slowly starts to droop down and
begins to spill a little bit onto Victoria's rug.

Shane catches the glass, but overcompensates, and sloshes a
bit in the other direction. Maybe some of it lands on him.
Victoria hands him a kleenex.

VICTORIA
Oh... here. I think I have club
soda.

Shane sets his glasses down and gazes at Victoria, in a
stupor. She misconstrues it for something else, smiles and
glances away. He leans forward to get a closer look, like
he's going to kiss her. Victoria gives a surprised chuckle,
then:

SHANE
(dazed, dreamily)
You look like my second grade
teacher, Miss Pendleton... She had
the softest hands. Palmolive
hands. Mmmmm.

Long, awkward pause.

VICTORIA
Oh... Well...I'm going to finish
getting ready.
(beat)
So, you know, just hang out on the
couch.

She hands him a tv remote.

VICTORIA (CONT'D)
I've even got on-demand. Just
punch buttons, or something.

Victoria gets up and goes to a room in the back, presumably
to the bathroom.

Shane's gaze falls back to the laptop on her coffee table. He
pulls out the USB key. He takes a deep breath, just trying
to keep it together.

SHANE
(To himself)
Pwned...

Shane looks again toward the computer.

ANGLE ON COMPUTER SCREEN

CU UPLOAD BAR

RESUME

Shane glances over at the bathroom and then back at the
computer, trying to force himself to concentrate.

VICTORIA (O.S)
So, what do you do?

SHANE
Just a 9 to 5, cubicle hell... all
shitty.

VICTORIA (O.S.)
Oh. I thought you worked in
construction.

Shane, realizing he answered outside of his pretend role,
tries to cover.

SHANE
Um... Yeah, I do indoor
construction.

VICTORIA
Cool! Like interior decorating?

Shane doesn't answer. He types frantically.

ANGLE ON COMPUTER SCREEN READING:

UPLOADING AND ENCRYPTION COMPLETE.



INT. VICTORIA'S BATHROOM

She carefully arranges on strand of hair, as she waits for
Shane to answer. Then she changes her mind and rearranges
the hair.

VICTORIA
Are you an interior decorator, or
is it more architecture-type stuff?

Shane still doesn't answer.

VICTORIA (CONT'D)
Helloooo?



INT. APARTMENT - OFFICE AREA

Shane pulls out the USB key, and sticks it into the plant
next to Victoria's monitor.

Victoria comes out and peeks at Shane on the computer. Her
eyes widen, in surprise.

Shane realizes he's been caught.

ANGLE ON COMPUTER SCREEN

As Shane closes out the window.

RESUME

He looks up at Victoria, guiltily.

Long pause.

VICTORIA
What were you doing on my computer?

SHANE
I'm sorry, I... uh.

VICTORIA
That's just weird. It's like using
someone else's toothbrush.

Shane starts to stand up, but he stands up too quickly. a

SHANE
I know, but...
(swaying)
Oh, fu---.

He hits the floor.



SHANE'S POV

Victoria is looking over him, concerned and a little freaked
out.

VICTORIA
Oh my god! Are you o--

CUT TO BLACK:

END OF EPISODE


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